Brilliant. Where did you get the inspiration from for the 'Undeadish'? Can you claim to have created a new fantasy 'race' here?!
I was admittedly inspired in a very general way by the Brothers of the Pines crim Michael Moorcock's second Corum series. Not exactly the same. They had given themselves over to a race of chaos creatures/gods and become sort of half living, with sap running through their veins instead of blood.